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A poster on the wall says:

Once, The proud citizens of Gilneas, And now look at us.
Nothing more than a pack of savage dogs.

Whilst some stand and fight the curse which has already taken so many, others surrender.
The fighters who died to the undead, because they could have been preparing when the worgen struck, Gone forever. Died for our freedom.

Don't let them have died invane!

Gilneas may have fallen, but whilst the gilnean blood runs through us all, We must stand and fight for our city!
We are Gilneas! We are the Gilneans! We will take back the land which is rightfully ours!

May those forsaken who stand in our way fear the true wrath of the living spirit! May the orcs who assist them be crushed!

So, I call for you, Citizens of Gilneas! Fight for your people, Fight for your city! Fight for our freedom!

Find me, Elizabeth Merewald, And together, We will make Gilneas rise again!

The Gilnean Revolt is a human or worgen RP guild for Gilneans (ICly).
The reason for this is to set a true example for Gilneans, as anything other than the stereotypical pure dog.
The guild ranks will be the hierarchy of an army, as it will be to stand against those who let the curse dominate, and to take back Gilneas.

The guild will have a website; It's still under development.
We will be based in Ruins of Gilneas & Stormwind

No death knights allowed.

Ranks
Militia:
General
Major
Captain
Liutenant
Private
Recuit
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Citizen

Recruitment Process
OOC:
Mini-test on rping
IC:

• Player meets me at wherever I yell I'm at
• Player asks to join
• Player signs form
• Player joins

18/03/2012 12:16Posted by Merewald

The guild ranks will be the hierarchy of an army,

Don't forget to include "Citizen" so there's even a bit of variety. I wish thee the best of luck with this endeavour, remember, good advertising will get you places!

18/03/2012 12:28Posted by Vamar

The guild ranks will be the hierarchy of an army,

Don't forget to include "Citizen" so there's even a bit of variety. I wish thee the best of luck with this endeavour, remember, good advertising will get you places!

I have included this. Strangely, This was my initial idea, yet when it came to actually making it I left it out. Thanks for pointing this out.

Couldn't you flesh the OP out a tad? List the ranks, their purpose, your recruitment process, both IC and OOC, et cetera.
Just a bit of advice - 'Tis best to include as much vital information in the main post as possible.
Otherwise, this looks rather good.

Done the ranks, recruitment process

May I suggest listing the purposes, etc, of said ranks, rather than just listing the names. As for your description of the Recruitment Process, to be brutally honest, it's somewhat lackluster. Just some input from me, but I'd suggest explaining what kind of questions you would ask said applicant IC, whom to contact OOC through /w, etc.
Also, is the Guild even formed yet? To me, though it could just be the Forums not updating, you're still in 'Twisted Sentry'. Personally, I'd advise you to have the Guild ready and fully formed before starting recruitment.

The guild is formed now, And yes, It's just the forums being slow. Even though it's updated my gear ok.... Weird.